First Rain (A Concrete Poem)
- Moonlight Wanderer
- 3 days ago
- 1 min read

The
Rain
Falls early
This morning,
As I tiptoe down
The stairs in thin socks
And my nightgown. And the
Last stair creaks, as I step on it,
And the house sighs with the wind.
And the hot air from the heater rattles,
Rattles against the vents. But I tiptoe on,
Breath held, as I pass the silent kitchen, into
The living room, to the big window, where I press
My face eagerly against the cold glass. And I can smell
In the air that cold, earthy dampness that is the first rain,
The first rain of the year, soaking into my lungs as I inhale,
Though the window is shut. The wooden boards on my deck are
Soaked dark brown, and a fine gray mist hovers above the earth.
And the eaves of the maple trees outside drip, and drip, and drip,
Sodden with the storm. Outside, hidden birds are singing, singing
With the song of the rain. And the rain falls down in sheets, the
sound swelling and sinking, swelling and sinking, like the roar
Of the ocean far away. But even though the first rain is
Cold, and incessant, and sharp as ice, I know that
Winter has gone. Because the first rain means,
Yes, I know, the first rain means,
That it is spring again.



IT'S THE SHAPE OF A RAINDROP. I love it :D
~ Lizzie Hexam
this is so lovely, julie!
Yess, I LOVE spring! This poem captures all the loveliness rain can bring! Also, morbid thought, when"Outside, hidden birds are singing, singing, With the song of the rain"...bet they're excited for some worms!!
This is so beautiful!💕