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The Whistle - A Poem

Feb 16

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I wrote this poem two years ago in my bedroom, when I heard a train whistle in the distance. There's a railroad in my town, but I didn't notice any trains until that night. It is a strange thing—I have only heard the whistle blowing on winter nights. There is something magical and nostalgic about the sound—I don't know why—but I've tried to capture that emotion in this little poem.


The Whistle


In the night she closed her eyes,

To hear the whistle blow

She heard the whistle, blowing low

Amid the falling snow.


In the dark she sat up straight,

To hear the whistle blow

And then she stood, and tiptoed slow

To the cold window.


Outside the glass where snow fell fast,

She saw the train go speeding past

And clear and low, amid the snow

She heard the train, its whistle blow.



Feb 16

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Comments (8)

Egan Weinacht
Feb 18

I have always liked trains. This poem was beautiful.

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Moonlight Wanderer
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Feb 18
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Yes, I think trains are really pretty awesome. Thank you, Egan!

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Audrey. S.
Feb 17

Awww! That was beautiful!

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Feb 18
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Thank you, Audrey!! 😊

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Autumn Padgett
Autumn Padgett
Feb 17

This is beautiful, Julie. Thank you so much for sharing! i love it, and I agree that you totally captured the feeling you were going for.

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Feb 18
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That's really good to hear! I'm so happy you loved the poem, Autumn. As always, your thoughts on writing mean a lot to me.

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Guest
Feb 17

You really do capture the magic and nostalgia in your writing. Beautiful poem, Julie!

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Moonlight Wanderer
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Feb 18
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Thank you so much for reading! I'm delighted you liked the poem!

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